my fictional moment in time !

L.G to write a fictional moment in time.
S.O.S 

• use interesting and engaging ideas.
• use an interesting beginning to hook in the reader.
• use a variety of different language features.
• use paragraphs                        

                                                                        Victory!

“This is the biggest race of my life” I tell my pit crew, “It could go well or it could turn to dust”.

VRMMMMMM! GO!  I’m racing for 1nz and before I know it I’m on my seccond lap. Graeme Barr is behind me and I think to myself me  “ This could be trouble”.  He tries to pass but I block him , and I soon appear on my last lap. Graeme makes his move and tries to spin me. “UNLUCKY!” I shout to myself , yes he pretty much just spun himself out. Um he could be a tad angry but he’s still in third as Phil Ogle has past the finish line and Graeme is  on the last straight with his foot right down limi-bashing.

What a race!