Lg: to be able to persuade others to our point of view through writing

Sos:

Plan your writing carefully so that it has an introduction , body, conclusion

Make sure that each paragraph begins with a main point that is backed up by evidence or detail

Make sure that the argument is based around facts and contain vocabulary that is appropriate to the audience

Point of view is clear throughout my writing

       Would you keep a dinosaur ?

Who would keep a dinosaur for a pet ?

It’s ridiculous ! some animals are just meant to be extinct . I am sure that it would be the most boring pet on earth. It’s not like you can take it for walks because it’s as big as a elephant , and imagine the looks you would get, horrible, just horrible , if only people didn’t have such childish mines and thought deeper about this situation .

Yes, I do more have more paragraphs worth of complaining. You should start thinking about the cost of food and where you would buy it. Amazon? Trade me? Who knows if this food I’m talking about actually exists?

Considering there aren’t many dinosaurs around these days and they don’t make new ones either . So come on would it actually be that cool?

I am sure a dinosaur is the most vicious pet you could ever think of.

One minute you're alive , nek minute you’re not. Imagine all the moola you would get for the pest. So think twice about keeping dinosaurs, there not the new trend and never will be!