Wednesday, September 13, 2017

lg: Be able to write a narrative text.
SOS:
1. Use technical language 
2. Use a variety of descriptive language
3. Use direct speech 
4. past tense 
5. in logical order.
 
Double backflip, 360 tail whip ! 
" guys guys " 
shouted  a guy in a rabbit-toes bucket hat.  "my name is Jimi"
"wait you mean"...
"yep , im Jimi Quench. I'm here because the nazi's are executing any  tourist  in japan . And we need you now ". "sure cuz " pops up Levi. 

When they arrived at the airport there was a private jet with a stair case. There was free wifi, biscuits and televisions . Ryan was making the most of the free wifi and uploading his latest video . While Levi was making his KTM into a death-machine.

They arrived with a welcoming blast of shrapnel. With levi on his KTM and ryan holding a Ak-47 , the nazi's were slowly dieing down when R.Willy got shot and needed cpr . levi managed to keep hi alive all the way to the hospital. They didn't think the poor fella would pull through. But slowly he recovered . The cops handled the rest of the nazi's , while the two heroes returned home only to get knighted by the queen for there braveness, for saving over 100 tourist and all the hard work they had pulled off.

5 comments:

  1. I like how you used a large variety of punctuation
    I like how you used descriptive words
    Next time use paragraphs
    :)

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  2. good language
    cool topic
    next time use paragraphs

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  3. good to see lg and sos
    cool story
    next time use paragraphs

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  4. good language
    creative topic
    use paragraphs

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