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The 6.5 foot tall “luke hobbs” is as strong as terminator . with his police badge on his belt and his muscles blowing up like balloons he frowns .
He has a combat pistol , his eyes are darker than dirt . he is wearing shades of black including cargo pants and an under armour t-shirt . He has dealt with the most dangerous criminals in the world.
good character description
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next time put in your lg and sos
great description
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put your LG and SOS
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Good description.
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Next step - Put in your LG and SOS. So people know what to base your comments on.
good description
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