KADE'S WRITING!

L.G to write a fictional moment in time.

S.O.S

• use interesting and engaging ideas.
• use an interesting beginning to hook in the reader.
• use a variety of different language features
• use paragraphs        

Moment in time

Ice cream melting kids shouting, as we walk along the golden beach.

My feet are making the sand screech while Tylah is as busy as a bee taking selfies . That feeling as I look out to the sunset it’s beautiful. The sun is gazing on me which makes sun block handy.  The one thing I regret is not getting boysenberry ice cream.

The waves are calm, “we will definitely be coming back here” Dad whispered.