Persuasive writing
In my point of view you should let me on this ark. All I need is a little area , not a palace or anything like that. Just please let me on your ark. You think two little pigs is enough but what happens if one dies , or both die. And you’ll like my candy dispensing skills for sure!. You’ll probably want a spare or two for the barbie as well so I can replace your delicious treat. Once again please let me on this ark of yours.
good use of language
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hi i like the way your point of view is clear your next step is to add more punctuation
ReplyDeleteI like your story nice language
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next step use paragraphs