Lg:To write a moment in pain.

sos:

Use interesting and engaging ideas

Use an interesting beginning to hook in the reading

Use a variety of descriptive language and features

Use paragraphs

Finger vs sprig

“You can do it Stratford!” I here from the sideline.

“ Ha what are the rest doing” I think to myself. Before I know I’m on the ground, I see a prop coming to finish blowing out. “Ahh! that’s my finger you’re standing on mate” I yell in pain.He just laughs not knowing what he has just done.

Tape will do the job mum says.